| Message ID | 20230420155723.1711048-7-alex.bennee@linaro.org |
|---|---|
| State | Superseded |
| Headers | show |
| Series | docs: various (style, punctuation and typo fixes) | expand |
On 20/04/2023 17.57, Alex Bennée wrote: > A possessive its needs no ' whereas the contraction of it is does. > > Signed-off-by: Alex Bennée <alex.bennee@linaro.org> > --- > docs/system/guest-loader.rst | 6 +++--- > 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/docs/system/guest-loader.rst b/docs/system/guest-loader.rst > index 9ef9776bf0..304ee5d531 100644 > --- a/docs/system/guest-loader.rst > +++ b/docs/system/guest-loader.rst > @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ The guest loader does two things: > - load blobs (kernels and initial ram disks) into memory > - sets platform FDT data so hypervisors can find and boot them > > -This is what is typically done by a boot-loader like grub using it's > +This is what is typically done by a boot-loader like grub using its > multi-boot capability. A typical example would look like: > > .. parsed-literal:: > @@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ multi-boot capability. A typical example would look like: > -device guest-loader,addr=0x47000000,initrd=rootfs.cpio > > In the above example the Xen hypervisor is loaded by the -kernel > -parameter and passed it's boot arguments via -append. The Dom0 guest > +parameter and passed its boot arguments via -append. The Dom0 guest > is loaded into the areas of memory. Each blob will get > -``/chosen/module@<addr>`` entry in the FDT to indicate it's location and > +``/chosen/module@<addr>`` entry in the FDT to indicate its location and > size. Additional information can be passed with by using additional > arguments. > Reviewed-by: Thomas Huth <thuth@redhat.com>
Alex Bennée <alex.bennee@linaro.org> wrote: > A possessive its needs no ' whereas the contraction of it is does. > > Signed-off-by: Alex Bennée <alex.bennee@linaro.org> Reviewed-by: Juan Quintela <quintela@redhat.com>
diff --git a/docs/system/guest-loader.rst b/docs/system/guest-loader.rst index 9ef9776bf0..304ee5d531 100644 --- a/docs/system/guest-loader.rst +++ b/docs/system/guest-loader.rst @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ The guest loader does two things: - load blobs (kernels and initial ram disks) into memory - sets platform FDT data so hypervisors can find and boot them -This is what is typically done by a boot-loader like grub using it's +This is what is typically done by a boot-loader like grub using its multi-boot capability. A typical example would look like: .. parsed-literal:: @@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ multi-boot capability. A typical example would look like: -device guest-loader,addr=0x47000000,initrd=rootfs.cpio In the above example the Xen hypervisor is loaded by the -kernel -parameter and passed it's boot arguments via -append. The Dom0 guest +parameter and passed its boot arguments via -append. The Dom0 guest is loaded into the areas of memory. Each blob will get -``/chosen/module@<addr>`` entry in the FDT to indicate it's location and +``/chosen/module@<addr>`` entry in the FDT to indicate its location and size. Additional information can be passed with by using additional arguments.
A possessive its needs no ' whereas the contraction of it is does. Signed-off-by: Alex Bennée <alex.bennee@linaro.org> --- docs/system/guest-loader.rst | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)